Signe Vollandotter

Discussion in 'Character Creation & Submissions' started by Jun, Apr 30, 2018.

  1. Jun

    Jun New Member

  2. Luca

    Luca Administrator Staff Member

  3. Luca

    Luca Administrator Staff Member

    Alrighty, first thing's first, I think the explicit depictions of Signe's private parts can be dialled back a bit. Try using innuendo, unsaucing the language and the like. Let people willing to go down that rabbit hole find out the fun stuff for themselves.

    A-are you sure you meant that? There's something profoundly wrong with that sentence. Maidenhands do not have accelerated growth - they age around the same rate as Humans. The Maidenhand way of life is described well otherwise.

    Back to you, @Jun.
     
  4. Jun

    Jun New Member

    Can fix both of those easily. I read the maidenhead late; should've re-read! On it
     
  5. Jun

    Jun New Member

    All changes made, btw.
     
  6. Luca

    Luca Administrator Staff Member

    You got a couple of typos here and there, but the meat of the character biography is looking good.

    I call this character Approved - where do you wish to play them?
     
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